FMA: Havoc x Roy "To Be There Now"

[jabbertalky]

Title: To Be There Now
Author: Prolificmuse
Theme #9: Siblings for 55themes (Old, mostly dead LJ comm)
Genre: Angst, Character introspection.
Warnings: None
Rating: PG-13ish.
Pairing: Jean Havoc x Roy Mustang
Summary: A Sequel to “ It Was Just a Fling.” One night, Havoc is looking out the window thoughtfully, remembering who taught him his

Comments

[raceulfson]

That was sweet and sad and perfect. The prose had that winter day feel to it; I could see the snowflakes drifting by the window, and feel the warmth of Roy's body. Wonderful job.

I also really liked the snap shot of Jean's childhood: just a few words but it built a rich back story. I love Margo already.

Thank you for not having Roy be a clod about it all, too.

[jabbertalky]

Thank you for your comment about the feeling of the prose, it made me happy to hear. I am glad that you enjoyed it!