Story time!

[jacarath]

   I turned to him and smiled. The smile on his face sent a shiver down my body; I could see myself in his eyes, and I'm sure that he could say the same. It was a dark night, and the patter of the rain outside the cave only served to push me closer to him. It was a moment like no other - The two of us, all alone, blocked from the outside world by

Comments

[silyon]

Rather good, all things considering. A bit short for my taste and just cut's off, but otherwise it seems good

[sonariss]

The snuggling and the feelings projected were awesome. The transformation was much more half-hearted in style, and believe me when I say I can imagine why :P

[marukay_zeron]

It is a good story, but I think the shifting sequence was a bit too short cut. The feelings while snuggling and loving silently in the exile of that cave, genius.