I think you wrote this really well. I love how you went into the whole confusion and hesitation that the two of them must have felt when they realised they wanted each other sexually. It made the whole story feel more real. Well done!
I'm sorry to not have replied earlier and I'm glad you left a comment on this fic after years of it's release. :) It's always appreciated when a reader finds a fic so interesting as to leave their thoughts years after it's been posted. I'm glad you enjoyed this fic and that you loved the confusion and hesitation. Of course I can never know how real this fic could actually be (you never know what stories come true out there), but I'm glad you perceived it as such.
Thank you for reading and commenting! Sorry for the late reply. ^.^/
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Thank you for reading and commenting! Sorry for the late reply. ^.^/
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