Comments | jack_batelin: LJ Idol Week 2: Uphill, Both Ways, Barefoot

jack_batelin

LJ Idol Week 2: Uphill, Both Ways, Barefoot

Oct 30, 2009 12:52

"You said you had something for me?" I ask. Flash nods with his mouth full and pats his messenger bag but doesn't open it. Doesn't want to get mayo or ketchup on the merchandise. We shall have an enjoyable meal first, he says, business second.
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comedychick October 30 2009, 17:12:43 UTC

Great installment! Man, what deception. I really like how you handled Flash and how he got his name. :D

jack_batelin October 30 2009, 17:14:00 UTC

I thought that I should establish early on that despite being the hero of the tale, Jack is not a nice man.

comedychick October 30 2009, 17:18:06 UTC

haha, yes that could be important!

supremegoddess1 October 30 2009, 18:12:39 UTC

different!

pixiebelle October 30 2009, 18:14:00 UTC

Very good! I love your writing, it kept me interested the entire time and I love the twists and turns it takes. Oh, and of course the references from snopes.com and whatnot. Great job!

shadowwolf13 October 30 2009, 21:49:20 UTC

Very interesting!I like how you keep moving the story along. :)

beautyofgrey October 31 2009, 02:24:03 UTC

I look forward to your next installment - I enjoy the way you weaved the topic into this.