Oh nice! I don't usually read fic with SG-1 version 2, simply cos I didn't watch the later eps to know the characters, but cos this is you and cos it's jack_built... Nice incorporation of Bahasa, heh. Not to mention Baal! And great angst, yey!
This was /awesome/! Great backstory for Vala, and I love the whole thing about Vala being disappointed about the trash cleanup and Radek building something that would draw the attention of the FBI.
Cam would love his cooking shows! Hee. And I love the Vala backstory, and how you blended the show past into this verse. Plus Baal? Awesome. And Daniel and Vala having a misadventure? Always win.
This was utterly fantastic. As usual, late to every worthwhile party, but I got here in the end. I loved this. And while I understand that this is "a light fluffy community", it was grand to see a little more of the real drive behind our favorite characters come through, in whatever form. Bravo. Really.
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Nice incorporation of Bahasa, heh. Not to mention Baal! And great angst, yey!
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Thanks! Glad you liked. :)
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