[one-shot] Practice

[jackie_no_tsubo]

Title: Practice
Author: JackieNoTsubo@LJ aka Flailness@tumblr aka Jackie8er@AOOW
Fandom: Kanjani8
Pairing: RyOhkura
Rating: Teen and Up Audiences
Warnings: Underage
Words: 3,036
Summary: Ohkura receives an odd request from Nishikido.
Author's note: First Ryohkura I ever wrote, first fanfic I've ever written in English (not my first language).

Comments

[agogo_kun]

Aaaah finally another Ryohkura after a while~ Not that many people write K8 fanfic and this pair, I'm glad you wrote it :'}

And I can totally imagine chibi Ryo and chibi Tada in this fic! I wonder why Ryo chose Tacchon of all people, maybe he's....? xD
And don't worry your English is looking fine for me ^^

Thank you for the fic! Please write another Ryohkura again, because we need more of them xD

[jackie_no_tsubo]

It's been a while, right?! I've been re-reading all Ryohkura fanfics around here for years. And now I finally decided to publish my own xD Maybe, now, other people will feel motivated to write again, I hope!!

Thank you so much for your kind commentary!

Well, I actually have a sequel in mind for this one, that is going to answer why Tacchon of all people. hahahah

Thank you very much! =DDD

[madhuman]

*-* loved it!!
Couple of grammar mistakes, but I still get the idea perfectly!!
As agogo_kun said, its been a while since a Ryohkura, thanks for writing it & sharing it ♥
Love from México ^^

[jackie_no_tsubo]

Thank you!!! Would it be a bother if your pointed out that mistakes to me, so I won't make it again T^T I'm kind of a perfectionist and I want to write even better! hahaha

Right?! I kept re-reading over and over all Ryohkura fanfics I could find. Well, it was about time! hahaha I mean, Ryohkura ship used to be huge, some years ago, right??

Thank you very much! Love from Brazil!!! ♥

[takepluche]

Haaaaaa a RyOkura fanfic ♥ It's been a while !

I laughed a lot : the scene was so fun XD

PLease write more RyOkura fanfic, I miss it so much D:

Thank you for this pleasant reading~

[jackie_no_tsubo]

Deshou??? Why Ryohkura stopped being popular!! That bugs me.. =(( But I plan to bring the ship back to life!! I'm gonna sink with this ship! hahaha

The fact that you laughed a lot made my day! xD In my mind it was a little funnier, but at least I could make some people laugh! haha

I'm gonna try writing some more... Real Life is kinda of a mess, so I just had to write this one because of the Easter holiday! T^T

Thank you!! ♥

[takepluche]

I don't know ! I keep searching Ryokura fanfics but I find only old fics so I'm a little sad ;___; and frustrated too.... XD
I write RyOkura fanfics but it's in french... I don't have an enough good level in english to translate them (and I'm a little lazy too... =x)

Ha yes it was very fun and I told to a friend to read it and she loved it too n.n

I understand so ganbatte ne :D

[jackie_no_tsubo]

Well, I'm planning on bringing Ryohkura back to life u.u Because this otp is just too flawless to be ignored. Right???

I wished I could read yours. T.T But my acknowledge of French is extremely limited. :(

Own, thank you for showing her and tell her I say thanks for liking.

Stay tunned, I'm publishing a new one this weekend!!! ;)

[lalois]

Oh dear, oh dear, oh dear... apart from the fact that your main page is refreshing with the grass and the daisies and the zipper and the green+yellow which is always TORN and LOVE, this fic is... totally lovely TOT
I like the way you write, really <3
And, well, may I envy a bit this Kannachan girl?

I can totally depict each scene in my mind and gosh, though young, they're so in character XD
I burst out laughing about all the stuff Ryochan "casually" brought with him to practice even before having Tacchon's approval, cute boy with evil sense of things XD
Shoujo mangas, BL... tags and movies and "I studied a little" that made me crack up, literally XD
Pretty woman XD XD XD!!!!
Plus, Ryochan on Tacchon's lap guiding the younger's hands onto his waist <3

[jackie_no_tsubo]

The zipper actually is a subliminal message, that leads us to think of Ryohkura steamy scenes, unzipping stuff and... hahaha (The best part of being Brazilian Torn Shipper is all the yellow+green stuff hanging around. And I can wear any yellow+green outfit, and people will think I'm being patriotic - when I'm actually supporting Torn hahahahahahaha) And aren't we all envying Kanna-chan?? (She is real, you know. She really was Ohkura's first kiss. T^T)

Thank you so much for your comment! I really loved it! I re-read like three times, because it made me really happy. hahahah ~hugs~

I love how hard-working Ryo is for everything, and I wanted to transmit that into the story! hahaha He is so cute, omg.

Thank you so much again. <3

[lalois]

Aahahhahaahah yeah during last World Cup I also happened to think that brazilian colours were the luckiest with all that green and yellow!
Plus, you also have RIO de Janeiro so... totally the best XD

*hugs back*

I also love hard-working Ryo *_*

[yohana_lestari]

omg, do u know how happy i am when i saw ur post on jent fanfic? omg, i'm so happy finally someone make torn fic, it's really been a looong time, and i really miss torn, so ur fic is a moodbuster for me >w<
ryo-chan is an evil since he was kid, ne? but, i still love this evil, anyway xDD
thanks for this, and please write another fics of eito, esp torn, thanks xD

[jackie_no_tsubo]

I know!!! Whenever I found a torn fanfic I've never read, I'd get so hyper that I'd even start jumping on the street (lol). But it has been so long since someone published a new one, I decided to do my own T^T

I'm so glad to see that everyone misses torn, this OTP is just so flawless, come one ;3;

Thank you for your comment. I'm gonna publish a new one soon. =)