(LFN) Some Things You Lose (and Some Things You Just Give Away) (6/20)

[jackie_rambles]

Please see the Some Things You Lose (and Some Things You Just Give Away) Chapter Guide for story details including summary, warnings, disclaimers, etc.

Part Five: My Dear, There’s Been a Change of Plans

Some Things You Lose
(and Some Things You Just Give Away)
Part Six: Paint a Heart Repeating, Beating, Don’t Give Up

Comments

[madamedarque]

I love this so much! Nikita being clever, but Madeline and Paul being better at the game--it mirrors the show, doesn't it? The dialog between Walter, Nikita, and Quinn is hilarious. And what is up with the heartbeat? Need to know...

[jackiejlh]

*grins* I've seriously been waiting to write the Madeline & Paul 'reunion scene' since day one, so I'm thrilled that you like it!! <3 This story is twisty and hard to write, but so much fun to work on. Lol.

[clueless_02]

Oh so good!!!

You really never miss a beat when you write. It is just one awesome part after another!

With a look bordering on disgust, Nikita replies. "I generally tried not to."

"Too much like thinking about your parents having sex?"

Blasphemy!!!!!!! But still hilarious!

And as always, you write Madeline so well! I really like how you have stripped her world of constants and made her adapt to an environment that is almost familiar but not quite. Anyways, excellent job as always!

[jackiejlh]

Blasphemy!!!!!!!

*grins* I couldn't help myself.

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're enjoying it!!

[jaybee65]

I really should give you a long, detailed comment about all the things that are wonderful about this, but right now I'm just so *immersed* in the story, I can't be analytical! I'll have to leave the longer comments on my second read. Suffice it to say, this is FABULOUS and I'm dying for more!

[jackiejlh]

*blushes profusely*

I'm so glad you're enjoying this (and that it's managed to keep your interest despite not getting to the main part of the story yet)!! Lol. I'm having more fun writing this fic than any other I've written, I think...

[madika555]

This is fantastic! I feel like the old good days when I was waiting to see the next episode of LFN and now I'm waiting to read the next part of your ff.
M&O are perfect! And I love Walter too.
Thanks

[jackiejlh]

Thank you so much! This is certainly a lot of fun to write, and I'm so glad that you're enjoying it!! :D

[caramelapples11]

Ah, fascinating read! It's been so long since I've read TR fanfiction; I hope you'll write more! :D