New lyric sketch...tell me what you think...(could be a poem considering i don't write music..yet)

[jackielawn49]

                                                                        confusing is it?
                                                                        or so you say
                                                                  but it's not where close
                                                                     to what it is for

Comments

[slavescreams]

i may be a bit braindead however i totally dig it. very deep and i totally respect lyrics/poetry with meaning and emotion.

great job :)

[jackielawn49]

thanks