Ordinary, chapter 34

Aug 15, 2012 08:00

summary: Ian is diagnosed with cancer. In this chapter, Ian goes to see Kris.
warnings: sadness and foul language
rating: pg-13

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mysmoshylife13 August 15 2012, 12:54:21 UTC
NOOO KRIS CAN'T LEAVE! D': I love their conversations. :( Amazing as usual, I could say a lot more about this but I'm saving it for my speech :P

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jackiestolz August 15 2012, 13:28:52 UTC
I love them too, but hey, maybe you haven't seen the last of him. Thank you!

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mysmoshylife13 August 16 2012, 15:53:31 UTC
You better not be lying to me Jackie! I need my emotional conversations ;P

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renee_smosh August 15 2012, 13:52:55 UTC
D': Ian's therapy session made my heart ache! Oh my god.... D: When it said, "As Anthony stood and placed the camera on the table, Ian was reminded of what he needed to say..." I was like, "OOO! Is he gonna tell him?!" I felt a little ray of hope! hehe But no. Anyways, amazing as usual! :D

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jackiestolz August 15 2012, 14:40:29 UTC
Yeah, I was sort of trolling you guys with that moment, but no, he didn't say anything. Some of those therapy sessions were rough to write, they were insanely sad. Glad you like it, thank you :)

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jackiestolz August 15 2012, 16:51:50 UTC
Ha, maybe he will, you'll just have to wait and see :)

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jackiestolz August 15 2012, 18:16:41 UTC
I'm not spoiling anything, I'm just saying maybe (I think I've answered every question about the future of this fic with a maybe). Trust me, I'm trying very hard not to spoil anything for you guys :)

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smoshy_fangirl August 15 2012, 23:16:01 UTC
"Kris stood, watching, arm still outstretched. He had said farewell for a reason. He knew Ian wasn't coming back."

When I read that, I cried. I couldn't even move on to the next part of the story. After a couple minutes I finally got to reading the rest. (btw YOUR WRITING IS SOOOOOOOOO AMAZING!) I am really anxious to find out what is going to happen next!

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jackiestolz August 15 2012, 23:52:07 UTC
When I wrote that bit, I just stared at the screen for like ten minutes. I never cried writing this story, but I think that time I was really close to doing so. And thank you so much! You're too kind. And you'll see the next bit on Saturday :)

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jackiestolz August 18 2012, 03:23:15 UTC
Lol, thanks :)

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