summary: Ian dies of cancer. Anthony confesses something to his coworkers. warnings: hella swearing and mentions of suicide rating: pg-13 ( Read more... )
I think it's really fantastic so far and I feel like it's a bit of a shame you're losing interest, though may I suggest after you conclude it that you let us know what you originally wanted in the story in maybe a paragraph or two? It might help bring more closure to it if you feel the ending you're going to write lacks it. Anyway, I love your writing and hope you continue writing other Smosh stories in the future after this ends.
thank you! that's actually a very good idea, i'll probably do that. and yeah i might keep writing for smosh, whenever inspiration strikes me i'll be here :)
Even though I'm saddened tat you'll be shortening this story, I understand why you made this decision. I've been with you from the very start, reading the first chapters of Ordinary, as Ian sat in that uncomfortable steel chair in the Doctor's office... Good times :3 (Okay, I know it wasn't good that Ian had cancer and everyhting, but - you know what I mean!) Hope you continue to write great Smosh stories, Jackie :) ~Eimear <3
I really loved this chapter, it was very heart-breaking and the part with Kalel/Kristen shocked me quite a bit; I really wasn't expecting it!
It's a shame that you don't feel the same interest for this series any more but it's also very important that you - first and foremost - are happy with writing it.
Please do whatever feels best for you. I'll read whatever you write and I'll support you, no matter what.
Pfoeee wherehave I been the last chapters. I missed it a lot! I was everytime at the verge of tears, but when Anthony said Kalel had to leave, I cried. The only support he had, he is letting her go? No job, all these questions, no one with answers anymore... This is so sad ;_;
I loce your writing. You get me really into it right away. You got skillz, but that was known :) I hope you find the sparkle to continue this in your original plan. If not, want me to write an essay about how awesome this fic/you are ?? :p
yeah man, sorry it's all sad, at least he has his family though right? just kidding i'm gonna ruin that too HAHAHAHAHAHA. thank you so much though sweetheart, even though i don't think this fic is going on much longer, i'll try to keep writing for this fandom :)
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(Okay, I know it wasn't good that Ian had cancer and everyhting, but - you know what I mean!)
Hope you continue to write great Smosh stories, Jackie :)
~Eimear <3
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It's a shame that you don't feel the same interest for this series any more but it's also very important that you - first and foremost - are happy with writing it.
Please do whatever feels best for you. I'll read whatever you write and I'll support you, no matter what.
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I loce your writing. You get me really into it right away. You got skillz, but that was known :)
I hope you find the sparkle to continue this in your original plan. If not, want me to write an essay about how awesome this fic/you are ?? :p
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thank you so much though sweetheart, even though i don't think this fic is going on much longer, i'll try to keep writing for this fandom :)
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