Recovery, chapter seventeen

Jul 08, 2013 12:54

summary: Ian dies of cancer. this is the final chapter
warnings: you'll cry
rating: pg-13
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Re: welp jackiestolz July 8 2013, 23:12:01 UTC
yeah, it's been over a year, crazy. thank you so much sweetheart :)

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juulchii July 8 2013, 23:39:24 UTC
I'm crying so bad. I'm all covered in tears on 1.30 AM.

When reading the last words, you kinda process what's happened, seeing all what happened to Anthony in this story in one second and then the tears started to flow.
Oh my god. How. Could. You.

I'm glad you told what happened to the others, It's like they do with true life stories on TV.
Your original idea sounds much sweeter :) Shows that Anthony IS a strong person.

I'm sorry if I sound too negative. I love your writing, love how you got me into this story so much, love how you made me read this for a year, love how I will never forget this story, in a good and bad way.

Sad it's over. Sad how it ended.

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jackiestolz July 8 2013, 23:49:32 UTC
hahahaha, i feel very evil. i like the original more too but i couldn't commit to the story, and i don't think it would've worked out so great if i tried to end it nicely now. you don't sound negative at all! thank you so, so much :)

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cricket_mai July 9 2013, 06:51:41 UTC
Wow. I can't believe it's over. I remember when I found Ordinary, at chapter 12, and started following it. Your quality stayed amazing up until the very end. I'm going to miss checking for updates ;_; Thanks for a great story!

(And happy early birthday?)

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jackiestolz July 9 2013, 11:54:35 UTC
no, thank you so much for all your lovely comments! and thank you for the early-birthday wishes :)

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esprz July 10 2013, 05:33:40 UTC
Brilliant. Absolutely brilliant. You've done so much to keep me through all the chapters and I want to thank you for providing us with such an astoundingly realistic story. I know the ending was a bit rushed but I loved it. Heartache and angst is something I love seeing in stories and who knows. Maybe they both live on somehow in the afterlife. (Wishful thinking on fictional characters based on real people)

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jackiestolz July 10 2013, 13:15:37 UTC
thank you so much! i love angst too, it's my favorite. and haha maybe, who knows :)

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anonymous July 10 2013, 21:20:28 UTC
Now I´m definitely heartbroken! ;A;
It was so sad and so well-written!

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jackiestolz July 11 2013, 00:37:44 UTC
aw sorry about the heart breaking, but thank you so much :)

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