Comments | jackiestolz: Ordinary, chapter 11

jackiestolz

Ordinary, chapter 11

Apr 28, 2012 08:55

summary: Ian is diagnosed with cancer. In this chapter, he and Anthony make a music video.
warnings: sadness and language. Also, this chapter is really long and overly stuffed with Youtubers.
rating: pg-13

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ian hecox, ord, smosh, pg-13

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jackiestolz April 29 2012, 00:01:20 UTC

Thank you! This chapter was really long, and took awhile to write, glad to see you enjoyed it :)

thestoryliveson April 29 2012, 08:09:50 UTC

This was brilliant! I loved their video, you're really clever for thinking that up. And this is brilliant writing, as usual. I really enjoyed it and can't wait for more.

jackiestolz April 29 2012, 13:29:10 UTC

Thank you! I just tried to think of something crazy, something only Smosh would do.

ext_1185819 April 29 2012, 23:11:09 UTC

This is amazinggg :O I hate waiting for it but then i read it and its sooooo worth it <3 again im sooo in love with this !!

jackiestolz April 29 2012, 23:52:14 UTC

Thank you so much :)

9800andseagulls April 29 2012, 23:43:57 UTC

Well. That was just amazing.
ASTOUNDING.
It was so well written, possibly one of the best written pieces in this community.
Also, you can write fics, songs and now raps?
Your'e too talented. Give me some.
I am so impressed, its crazy! I can't wait for more.
I'll stop kissing you ass now :)

jackiestolz April 29 2012, 23:55:02 UTC

Wow, oh my god, thanks so much! I mean, it's not that great, the first few chapters are poorly written and there's some grammar mistakes, and I have no idea what the beat to that rap would be. All of that aside, I'm actually quite proud of it, and I'm so glad everyone else likes it and supports it :)

9800andseagulls April 30 2012, 00:37:15 UTC

Oh behave! You're only human! Generally speaking anyway the content and plot are usually the devices which keep me hooked on certain fics. Grammar and spelling do pay an important role however, when a story has as much plot and overall, in my eyes “staying power” one or two mistakes are meaningless when a fic is so well written such as yours. You seem like you really have the long term plot figured out and there has been an awful lot of careful and dedicated planning gone into this.

jackiestolz April 30 2012, 01:46:23 UTC

Thank you so much! And I do have the plot figured out, I wrote out an entire synopsis at the early stages so I wouldn't get off track. I've never done it for writing before but I really like having it all planned out, things go far more smoothly. Thanks so much, I feel so flattered :)

raeofthestage April 30 2012, 20:40:49 UTC

EEP!!! This is still so sad!!!!!!!

jackiestolz April 30 2012, 22:22:50 UTC

Haha, I know, it's a bummer. Hope you liked it :)