Ordinary, chapter 24

[jackiestolz]

summary: Ian is diagnosed with cancer. In this chapter, Ian and Kris discuss his secret.
warnings: sadness and foul language
rating: pg-13

Comments

[vanamonkukka]

Oh my God! This chapter... it was just perfect! (I kinda cried, don't tell anyone.....) I have been reading this from the beginning and I have to say, it gets better all the time :) Absolutely one of my favorite fanfics! :)
Can't wait for chapter 25!

[jackiestolz]

Thank you so much! Yeah, when I started writing it I was really out of practice, so I think you can sort of see my writing improving as the story continues, haha. You're too kind, next chapter's up Saturday :)

[jackiestolz]

Thanks so much! I want the readers to understand Ian's motives and emotions. I'm glad you're looking forward to it, next chapter Saturday as usual :)

[jackiestolz]

Aw, sorry, I just love making my readers emotional. Thank you so much :)

[renee_smosh]

AHHH! I am IN TEARS! AND THAT HAS NEVER HAPPENED BEFORE! Beautifully written! When Ian said he was considering telling Anthony, i kinda squealed a little and then as i read on, the tears came! WAH! So I know I have said it a million times but, ohmygod! This story is freaking amazing! LOVE IT! Jackie, holy crap. That's all I have to say! :D

[jackiestolz]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you're super emotional on this chapter, it's one of the more important ones. And haha, I know, everyone wants Ian to tell Anthony. Maybe soon, maybe later, guess you'll have to keep reading and find out :)

[renee_smosh]

haha! If he told Anthony, it would be so awesome! But I get why he doesn't want to tell Anthony, and that's what makes this story so amazing and emotional to me! The SUSPENSION! :D

[jackiestolz]

Lol, I know. Thanks :)

[mysmoshylife13]

*cries* This was beautiful! :'D Aww Ian just completely broke down (so did I) :( Hope he gets the courage to tell Anthony! Also I'm a day late (sorry) but HAPPY BIRTHDAY for yesterday! :)

[jackiestolz]

Thank you! And don't worry about being a day late, I'm just grateful for the sentiment. And yeah, Ian was pretty emotional in this chapter, and trust me, there will be more of that in the future. Maybe he will and maybe he won't, you'll have to keep reading to find out :)

[mysmoshylife13]

Yay! More sadness! :P The sadness is good in this fic. I think exactly the same as DanielleTweeter. Damn you! :P

[jackiestolz]

Haha, thank you! Chapter twenty five came out today, incase you wanted to read more but wasn't aware. All of these comments are so nice, I'm so flattered :)