Comments | jackiestolz: Ordinary, chapter 25

jackiestolz

Ordinary, chapter 25

Jul 14, 2012 08:22

summary: Ian is diagnosed with cancer. In this chapter, Ian still tries to decide whether or not to tell Anthony.
warnings: sadness and foul language
rating: pg-13

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jackiestolz July 14 2012, 14:42:24 UTC

Haha, thank you! And you don't have to write long comments if you don't want to, just knowing that you like the chapter is fine with me :)
I feel bad for this Ian too, he's dying and so far he's told such a small amount of people. But he's felt so far that he should bear it alone, to protect his emotions/dignity and protect those around him. He's questioning that right now though, and in the next chapter, he makes a decision, so you'll see :)

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Re: Speechless, Again! jackiestolz July 14 2012, 14:47:55 UTC

Thank you!
Haha, he makes his decision next chapter, you'll find out then :)
And sorry to ask, but out of curiousity, how are you commenting on this from twitter? Is your lj account connected to your twitter account, or can anyone on twitter post reviews on lj under their twitter username?

mysmoshylife13 July 14 2012, 18:15:10 UTC

Just when I think this couldn't get any sadder... Sounds like Ian really has no good options here. :( He makes the decision next chapter?! Oh hell yes! :D Come on Wednesday, hurry up!

jackiestolz July 14 2012, 19:39:39 UTC

Yeah, it's pretty sad, and whatever choice Ian makes won't really benefit him too much. Haha, see you wednesday :)

renee_smosh July 15 2012, 01:41:58 UTC

<333333333 LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!!!!! I'm really excited and scared to see what Ian decides to do! Wah! :D MIXED EMOTIONS!

jackiestolz July 15 2012, 02:36:40 UTC

Haha, thank you. I'm glad you've got all these mixed emotions, because that's what life is, and that's what I'm decribing, the end of Ian's life. You'll find out Wednesday :)

renee_smosh July 15 2012, 03:29:04 UTC

:D I can't freaking wait!

smoshslashbabe July 15 2012, 13:00:17 UTC

Ahhh! Amazing! I love this story, I have it as a reminder for every Wednesday and Saturday to check back! With every chapter I'm speechless and I bawl my eyes out! Amazing job can't wait to see what happens next!

jackiestolz July 15 2012, 14:05:23 UTC

Thank you, I'm glad that's your reaction, at times this story is supposed to be horrifically depressing, so I'm glad I accomplished that. Next chapter up Wednesday, and keep your eyes peeled, because the same day I'll be posting a seperate one-shot that won't make us all cry so hard :)