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jackiestolz

Ordinary, chapter 26

Jul 18, 2012 08:27

summary: Ian is diagnosed with cancer. In this chapter, Ian makes a decision.
warnings: sadness and foul language
rating: pg-13

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Re: FINALLY!!!! jackiestolz July 18 2012, 13:05:40 UTC

Ha, there's a lot more wrong with this story than that, but yeah, small mistakes. And no, he didn't, which sucks, but hey, maybe he'll change his mind, story's not over yet :)

juulchii July 18 2012, 15:21:49 UTC

Such a beautiful chapter Q_Q

jackiestolz July 18 2012, 16:53:09 UTC

Thank you :)

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Re: *FLIPS A TABLE* jackiestolz July 18 2012, 17:02:29 UTC

I knew everyone would get pissed, but hey, put that table back, it didn't do anything wrong. I understand, it's pretty awful of Ian, but I didn't write the story for the readers, I wrote it to be horrifically depressing. Well, not really, but looking at it now that certainly seems to be the point. Don't worry, it's not over yet, there's tons of stuff still happening to Ian, and maybe one of them is spilling his secret :)

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Re: *FLIPS A TABLE* jackiestolz July 18 2012, 17:31:52 UTC

I know, right? It's the longest thing I've ever written, and it's not even over yet. Although I must admit that it's been great for my writting- the difference between the first few chapters and the last are crazy, and it's helped my other work beyond belief. And yes, no more spoilers, don't want to tell you the whole thing :)

ext_1273635 July 18 2012, 16:22:19 UTC

I am disappointed in you Ian. But you do have your reasons. I love you but I hate you >:| MEH WHEN WILL HE TELL HIM!! CLIFFHANGERS EVERYWHERE

jackiestolz July 18 2012, 17:08:01 UTC

Lol, I'm glad you realize he has his reasons, I was worried everyone would just start a riot in the comments section. And don't worry, I'll finish all of the cliffhangers (maybe) :)

AH CRAP! XD mysmoshylife13 July 18 2012, 20:38:08 UTC

NOOOOOO! Ian was meant to tell him, God dangit! HOLY FIRETRUCK! D': He had better change his mind, or I might just cry in the corner. :P How do you get the conversations to sound so real? :S "No, objects that come out of 450 degree ovens are freezing." <--- I laughed so hard at this bit, my dad says it all the time. xD This was such a beautiful chapter, seriously firetrucking amazing again. :D

Re: AH CRAP! XD jackiestolz July 18 2012, 22:07:46 UTC

Haha, maybe he will, guess you'll have to keep reading. And I was just being as sarcastic as I could, I feel like that's what Ian and Anthony do during Lunchtime (your dad as well, lol, my whole family's just as sarcastic). Thank you so much, I'm flattered :)

Re: AH CRAP! XD mysmoshylife13 July 19 2012, 06:13:57 UTC

If he doesn't, I will hunt you down Jackie... MWAHAHAHAHA! xD You must get tired of saying 'you'll just have to keep reading.' :P True, it sounded like it was an actual Lunchtime! Your family too? I feel your pain. :P

Re: AH CRAP! XD jackiestolz July 19 2012, 15:12:07 UTC

I don't really tire of it too much, as long as I get nice reviews I'm happy to answer. Thanks, but seeing as I'm just as painfully sarcastic as all of them, it's really not that bad (until I've got friends over, then I'm just busy praying they don't embarass me - they usually do :))

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