Ordinary, chapter 27

Jul 21, 2012 08:36

summary: Ian is diagnosed with cancer. In this chapter, Kris tells Ian a story that he shouldn't have.
warnings: sadness and foul language
rating: pg-13

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jackiestolz July 21 2012, 16:51:20 UTC
Thank you! Poor Kris, indeed. Could you imagine being yelled at by your best friend's widow at his funeral? I'd feel awful.

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renee_smosh July 21 2012, 17:10:46 UTC
D: Poor Kris!! I hope that story makes Ian think if he wants to change his mind or not. Amazing as always! :D

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jackiestolz July 21 2012, 17:25:18 UTC
Yeah, poor Kris. Unfortunately, though, that story only encouraged Ian that he made the right decision. He felt really guilty when he was thinking over what he decided, guilty enough to consider changing his mind, and if Kris didn't tell him that story, he would have. It was highly inappropriate for Kris, as Ian's therapist, to tell him that story, because it made Ian feel like he did the right thing, and gave him an excuse to not think about changing his mind.
Thanks so much :)

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renee_smosh July 22 2012, 03:40:13 UTC
Ahh. I agree with you. I feel like Ian telling Anthony might make it easier on him when the time comes when Ian passes. Pardon my in deep thoughts haha! DANG IT KRIS! XD Honestly, I love this story so much, I happy with any outcome! I'll be so sad when this story ends though!

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jackiestolz July 22 2012, 04:32:31 UTC
Lol, I don't mind your deep thoughts at all, it's nice to know what my readers are feeling. Personally, I think that at first, yeah, Ian should've kept it to himself, but by now, he should've told people. But my opinion isn't what guides the story, so you guys can't be certain of what's to come. Thank you so much, but don't worry, I have things planned for when all of this is over, even though I'll be sad when it ends, too.

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smoshy_fangirl July 21 2012, 18:06:09 UTC
Holy Mother of God. This fic is sooo amazing! I have been reading since the beginning, and every time it gets better and better! I love how you describe it, and I love Ian's relationship with Kris. Keep up the good work! :D

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jackiestolz July 21 2012, 23:51:53 UTC
Thank you so much! I try to describe it so that we all know what's going on both physically and emotionally with Ian. And Kris was an amazing character to create, I totally love everything about him plus his great friendship with Ian, too.

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Re: Amazing story! Was NEVER excpecting this! jackiestolz July 21 2012, 23:56:14 UTC
Thank you! As sad as it is, I actually created a whole back story for Kris (plus Doctor Marrow and Deacon Franklin) and know it by heart. I sort of thought it up after I planned out the story, and I thought telling this little part of his life would give a nice explanation for his behaviors, since a therapist would never support such a thing. And I won't tell you what happens, you'll just have to read on :)

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extremesmosh July 22 2012, 09:42:45 UTC
You are the only reason I look forward to Wednesdays. I love the series, but I'm sad it's ending and I know Ian's going to die. :/ C'mon Wednesday. :)

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jackiestolz July 22 2012, 14:13:21 UTC
Aw, thank you! I'll be sad when it ends, too, but it's okay, we still have a few weeks left :)

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