Ordinary, chapter 28

[jackiestolz]

summary: Ian is diagnosed with cancer. In this chapter, he shows his frustration at his condition.
warnings: sadness and anger, plus foul language
rating: pg-13

Comments

[jackiestolz]

Thank you so much :)

[mysmoshylife13]

When Ian was shouting at Kris, I felt like he was shouting at me it was so real. I cried, for the first time in quite a few chapters :( How do you manage to not run out of things to write in this fic? It keeps getting better and better! Amazing again! :D

[jackiestolz]

Thank you! I hated writing Ian yelling, it almost felt like I was shouting at Kris, which made me feel wierdly guilty. And I think towards the end, I really didn't want to end it at all, so I just wrote as much as possible. I wanted to cover every emotion and every aspect of his life, including his anger. Thanks again :)

[jackiestolz]

Thank you! I love that line, I feel like it really shows how bitter and confused Ian can be because of all this, it really shows his humanity.

Re: Speechless for the third time!

[jackiestolz]

Thank you :)

[renee_smosh]

Okay. First off, when Ian was yelling, I stared bawling because it felt so real. I can't imagine Ian yelling like that and it broke my heart. It's shattered.

Second. This chapter made me lose it with my emotions. I cries harder than I ever have in a chapter. Beautifully written. Seriously. So much emotion in here that I actually felt like it was real. Amazing. Just.....wow.

[jackiestolz]

It wasn't really hard for me to picture Ian screaming and getting so mad, but it really freaked me out to write it because I felt angry, too, and he has some strong, scary as fuck emotions in this chapter. But yeah I'm pretty heartbroken too.
I feel kind of bad that I'm making everyone cry with these last few chapters, but at the same time it feels great because it shows how effective my writing can be. So sorry, but...kind of not really.
And thanks so much, I wanted it to feel real :)