Comments | jacknjill270: Unexpected Visitor, Holmes/Watson + Mycroft

jacknjill270

Unexpected Visitor, Holmes/Watson + Mycroft

Aug 11, 2010 19:21

I should be working on asylum!Holmes, but I got distracted by Sherlock. And then this week's challenge at shkinkmeme. I'm still coming for you, crazy!Holmes! Just - not right now.

Title: Unexpected Visitor (AKA "Jess is so freakin' bad at titles")
Fandom: Sherlock Holmes
Rating: PG
Pairings: Holmes/Watson
Disclaimer: Sherlock and Mycroft Holmes and Dr. Watson ( Read more... )

holmes/watson, mycroft motherfucking holmes, sherlock holmes, oh look i made words, my fic

Comments 7

apple_pathways August 18 2010, 03:55:25 UTC

I really enjoyed this! You have a talent for dialogue, and I think you nailed the dynamic between Sherlock and Mycroft. I especially enjoyed Mycroft turning his own superior powers of observation onto his brother, as he so often did in the stories.

jacknjill270 August 18 2010, 04:26:46 UTC

Thank you so much! Dialogue is really hard for me, so I'm glad that you think I got it right.

Also just noticed that I completely failed on the formatting. /Facepalm

apple_pathways August 18 2010, 04:31:15 UTC

Also just noticed that I completely failed on the formatting. /Facepalm

That would have been helpful for me to mention, wouldn't it?

But you fixed it! Did you try to switch from HTML to RichText editing? I think that bunged me up a few times when I was getting used to using LJ again.

innie_darling August 18 2010, 14:52:30 UTC

Oh, I want Watson to punch Holmes and then wrap him in the biggest hug ever. Go, Mycroft!

jacknjill270 August 19 2010, 02:00:56 UTC

Thank you! Yeah, I agree, Holmes does kind of deserve a punch in the face.

hazeltea August 19 2010, 00:28:45 UTC

Wonderful bit. I adore this.

jacknjill270 August 19 2010, 02:30:16 UTC

Aw, thank you so much!