The Long Night

[jack_and_sam]

Title: The Long Night
Author: aurora_novarum
Rating: PG
Warning/Spoilers: set anywhere after beg S4
Prompt(s): In a firefight, offworld, waiting for backup; telescopes/stargazing in general; Should Pluto still be classified as a planet (one for, one against)
Summary: Sam and Jack are holed up with an alien weapon and under siege.

Comments

[aurora_novarum]

Glad you enjoyed it so much and found the pov worked. Thanks for the fb!

[rdamel]

Very good--thanks!

Melissa M.

[aurora_novarum]

Thank you. :-)

[neiths_arrow]

Dang! I've been sitting at the edge of my seat and have barely taken a breath. You really know how to write action / adventure. Whoa!

[aurora_novarum]

This was amazing feedback! I'm glad the action worked as suspenseful for you. Thank you!

[suzannemarie]

What a great read! Very well thought out and engaging.

ETA: I had you pegged for either this one or Stockholm Syndrome. So I was really interested to see if you'd wind up having done something completely different. )

[aurora_novarum]

I'm glad you enjoyed it! "Well thought out" = banging head against keyboard enough times willing story to work. ;-)

I'm not sure if I should be impressed you picked me out, or worried I'm predictable. :-D (longest fic? Gotta be aurora. Heh)

But I take comparing my writing to annerbhp's awesome "Stockholm Syndrome" as high praise.

[suzannemarie]

I knew you were feeling frustrated with story. When I finished reading this one, I was thinking that if this one did turn out to be yours, your frustration was worth it. It's excellent.

[sg_fignewton]

Oh, fantastic! Every bit of it. Team dynamic and duo dynamic - both very satisfying. A great action/adventure all round!

[aurora_novarum]

Thank you! Glad both the Jack & Sam part and team dynamic (off"screen" and on) worked for you.