Bedtime Stories

[jack_and_sam]

Title: Bedtime Stories
Author: lilyleia
Rating: G
Warning/Spoilers: Teeny, tiny bit of Sam whump
Prompt(s): You think that's bad... and Out of the frying pan, into the fire
Summary: When Sam's injured, Jack attempts to weave a fairy tale with a lesson. If only Teal'c and Daniel would quit being so darn helpful.

Comments

[nandamai]

Aw, Janet! I wanted to hear the long version!

"Always look out for the fire when fleeing the pan."

Hahaha!

a Goldilocks with shorter, hipper hair and three huge bears doing their best to make sure that everything just right.

Awwwww!

[lilyleia78]

Thank you! I wanted to hear the long version too, but the deadline loomed large.

[sg_fignewton]

"Thank you, sir," Sam said without a trace of irony, "That was really inspiring."

Hee! Oh, this is too adorable for words! Love the unabashed team love (and team snarking at Jack). And that delightful last line: dreams of a Goldilocks with shorter, hipper hair and three huge bears doing their best to make sure that everything just right. Perfect!

[lilyleia78]

Thank you! The team just loves to help their boss out. :)

[samantilles]

A-DOR-ABLE!! Teamy goodness at its best!! Jack would so totally be the one to tell a bedtime story, especially to Carter... and Teal'c, well, he's always precious!!

[lilyleia78]

Thank you! Teal'c is always awesome indeed. :)

[aurora_novarum]

I'm with nanda in wanting to hear the long version too.

Sweet teamy banter and Janet bonus! Awwwww. Especially like how Teal'c tried to sneak into being "Star Wars", and Daniel ratting Jack out.

And the moral of the story! And Sam's dream!

Love this story to bits.

[lilyleia78]

Thank you so much for the great feedback! I love hearing your favorite parts.

I really wanted the long version as well, but there was this deadline and annoying real life and you know how it goes.

[poohmusings]

AWWWWWW! Too cute, love all the interruptions, and "I cannot make any such guarantees, O'Neill. You're story may need further correcting," Teal'c said. = Teal'c for the win! :D

[lilyleia78]

Thanks!

Teal'c is awesome in many, many ways. :)