The Saving Grace

Apr 07, 2009 09:52

Title: The Saving Grace
Author: traycer_
Rating: T
Warning/Spoilers: minor character death
Prompt(s): Rescue
Summary: Sometimes all it takes is a friend to help with the pain brought on by life's uncertainties.

The Saving Grace )

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rachel500 April 17 2009, 09:58:21 UTC
Well constructed with some good imagery. Jack comforting Sam was well done. :)

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traycer_ April 20 2009, 14:27:38 UTC
Thank you for the lovely feedback!!

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aurora_novarum April 18 2009, 21:38:21 UTC
I liked the lonely setting, and Carter's feeling of helplessness when it was something she couldn't fix. And Jack's characterization was fantastic.

And I always like exploring more with original characters, so this was just a lovely treat.

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traycer_ April 20 2009, 14:28:22 UTC
Such beautiful feedback! Thank you!! I'm glad that the story worked for you, and it's always great to hear that I was able to get Jack's characterization down. :)

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