Fic post; Body Parts. (R)

[jackschism]

Considered posting this to pinecity , but I'M SCURRED. I DID IT. :B

Title: Body Parts
Pairing: Urbine. Pinecity. Regardless. There's Karl and there's Chris.
Rating: Light R.
Warnings: Violence. Hurt/comfort, literally! A biiiit of angst. Language. Not for the young'n's.
Summary: Chris says something he shouldn't... and does his penance for it.
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Comments

[lafemmechatte]

ohh, i like this, a lot. you manage to convey a lot with so few words. well done.

[jackschism]

Thanks so much! :D

[jackschism]

Thanks so much!

Gaaaah, your iconnnn. So. Sexy.

[jackschism]

Yesss, I've been waiting for an American or Gael copy of it, since there's a telesync out there, but it's poor quality and captioned in Spanish.

[camellie]

Whoa, that was intense! The way you structured the fic as well as Chris' POV made it so exciting *gasp*

You broke my heart a little bit but it was worth it. It was easy to empathize with Chris because of the detailed description of violence and its effects. I also liked the moment of Karl's shocked realization.

Hopefully, you will post a lot more around here, hon ;)

[jackschism]

Thank you so much!! I'm pretty deathly shy about my fic, since I've only been writing since like... late October, so, it means a lot to get good feedback. :D

[soonest_mended]

and once again, you produce killer fantastic gorgeous writing, leaving me totally flabbergasted and wondering how the hell you can be like 'oh my god, what if people hate it' while WRITING THIS.

WHY ARE YOU MADE OF AWESOME.

[jackschism]

oh my lord Elise I miss you so much. WHERE ARE YOU. WHERE. I NEED YOU IN MY LIFE.

WE HAVE SO MUCH TO BITCH ABOUT.

I love that you read my fic. <3 You're beautiful.

[blcwriter]

Just perfectly hurty.

[jackschism]

Thanks! I looove your fics!

[blcwriter]

Why thank you!