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FIC: Intangible evidence

Jan 08, 2009 17:40

Title: Intangible evidence
Author: Jacoba06
Pairing: Dean/OFC
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: None, just got an idea and kind of went with it
Summary: Its school holidays and Dean meets a girl on his afternoon run.
Warnings: There’s sex

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ofc, fic, dean

Comments 8

dawnintheforest January 9 2009, 16:43:09 UTC

Ah that was so cute and so sad all at once! I especially loved the final image of Dean driving clutching the wheel still holding the knickers.

jacoba06 January 9 2009, 16:58:48 UTC

Thanks Sweets :)

I'm glad you liked it.

*hugs*

bonbonschnecke January 9 2009, 19:28:13 UTC

Ohhh beautiful written! And OMG Dean put those knickers away!!!! I could totally image him running and seeing her. It was perfect!

jacoba06 January 10 2009, 17:42:07 UTC

:) Thank you so much! I really worked hard on the imagary so I'm very happy to hear your great comment!

*hugs*

lovetheguys January 9 2009, 20:30:42 UTC

Aw, what a bittersweet, hot story! Well done! Love, Robin

jacoba06 January 10 2009, 17:43:42 UTC

Thank you so much! I wrote my heart out and really had trouble with "the scene" but I think it came out good.

*hugs*

miconic February 1 2009, 14:50:04 UTC

Oh, I like Emma. I like that she knows, shy and yet brazen enough to get what's hers. O, and Dean's a naughty pincher too. It's something that we would expect of Dean but it still wasn't easy. Thanks for sharing the fic. You've created an OFC that I like and adore.

jacoba06 February 2 2009, 05:50:33 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you like her, I like her too :) Thanks for reading and the comment!! Much loved!!!