Translations in B Minor

May 17, 2009 14:48

I still feel this is unfinished and I'm not crazy about the title. But if I don't post it today, I will hurt a kitten.

Title: Translations in B Minor
Character(s)/Pairing(s): Dan/Blair, brief mentions of GG cast
Rating: Harmless
Words: 1,022
Warnings: None, but possibly takes place during the summer before college. Unbetta’d. Mistakes all mine.
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gossip girl, fanfic: dan/blair

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jacobella41 May 20 2009, 13:07:42 UTC
aw, thanks so much! i'm glad you enjoyed it.

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corleones May 20 2009, 09:18:31 UTC
How did I miss this? How did you allow me to miss this? (Next time you write them- TELL ME!)

I love it. Dan turns at the sound, quick Anastasia, let’s get out of here!

You get them the way so few people do- and I have to believe that if every0ne saw things this way. Well then they'd fall in love just like we did. Dan- Dan.

I do not care what fandom says- I love Dan. And I like-admire-adore-worship your Dan. I want to run off with him.

Nate, she stole. Dan’s not mine to loose, so she gives him back in unreturned phone calls and pointed attempts to put Serena in his way.

GUH. SO good. So BLAIR

pushes back, always pushes back, punches Chuck, strangles Nate.

Speaks in a language she can understand: Need.

Shit. I love it. I love it so damn much. You're one of the best DBers out there. Seriously. LOVE it.

Even better than the first and I LOVED the first.

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jacobella41 May 20 2009, 13:22:24 UTC
me, you--the making out begins now, no?

oh! the things you say, bb!
and they come from you, you gorgeous writer, you.

I have to believe that if every0ne saw things this way. Well then they'd fall in love just like we did
THIS!

so you write and convert, and i'll reap the benefits and read. sound like a plan? :)

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corleones May 22 2009, 08:51:35 UTC
Yeesh.

Nate ends up with Vanessa in your story. I think I love this even more than I did the first time around. It is so pitch perfect.

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jacobella41 May 22 2009, 14:37:23 UTC
;)

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holycitygirl May 20 2009, 15:29:31 UTC
This is made of amazing. Every word.

Especially -- She shows up in Brooklyn, however, when the next catastrophe strikes, a perfect disaster of her own making or an overreaction to a legitimate injustice. Perhaps beginning with one bleeding into the other as these catastrophic Blair-things often do. So true.

It could happen this way (if we wrote the show). Oh how I wish we wrote the show.

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jacobella41 May 20 2009, 15:52:10 UTC
squee! don't feel a sense of obligation to read or comment but allow me to guilt you any way by saying your praise does wonderful things to my stomach! :)

Oh how I wish we wrote the show
yes. and yes. alas, we shall just spend all summer rewriting it, mais non. ;) i'm just about convinced to do my table and i'll subtly nudge you along in yours. nudge, nudge.

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holycitygirl May 20 2009, 15:58:32 UTC
I'll totally sign my summer away to the pursuit of D/B, if you will. ;) (You better sign up for that table.)

As for mine, I need to get back on that. C'est vrai. I just don't know which to do next.

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jacobella41 May 20 2009, 16:37:31 UTC
i am partial to everything in the middle column and the one about clowns ;)

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hallokittie May 22 2009, 17:14:46 UTC
I'm fairly certain that this fic made my life. Yeah. It's a fact. It's also a fact that you're amazingness personified. That's just a fact. I would LOVE to read more Dan/Blair stuff from you. That's my pathetic attempt at request. And I'm not above begging. I hope the DB bug bites you again and you gift us all with some more of this awesomeness. :)

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jacobella41 May 22 2009, 18:35:11 UTC
oh bb! flattery will get you EVERYWHERE! ;)
i wrote another one before this that may be to your liking. and i plan on doing a prompt table for them because i'm a masochist. i'm a fanfic newbie and terribly self concious about getting them right.

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jacobella41 July 27 2009, 19:06:32 UTC
what a lovely thing to say! thank you so very much :)

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