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jacobella41

their backs bow where their will would not

Sep 01, 2009 21:05

Their backs bow where their will would not dan/blair, pg, 330words. written rather hastily. for everything_inme, sorry i'm late.

( their backs bow where their will would not )

gg, fanfic: dan/blair

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jacobella41 September 2 2009, 23:54:11 UTC

aw, thank you! :)
*un mushes head*

lokiyan September 2 2009, 02:34:37 UTC

I love the end. Even without the picture, I could see it clearly. Beautiful imagery.

jacobella41 September 2 2009, 23:56:07 UTC

thank you very much. the picture was lovely though, so it takes most of the credit :)

kandykanemel September 2 2009, 04:20:07 UTC

very nice!

jacobella41 September 2 2009, 23:56:19 UTC

thank you!

porvora September 2 2009, 05:57:09 UTC

I just love the way you put their subtlety into words <3
beautiful.

jacobella41 September 2 2009, 23:56:44 UTC

thank you very much :)

ahmilli September 2 2009, 09:41:10 UTC

I love your usage of words.
I don't know how you put so many beautiful lines in such a short fic.
♥

jacobella41 September 2 2009, 23:57:03 UTC

thank you so much!