Series 8, week 25, lj entry. "Closer"

[jacq22]

Closer. “The Sea of Grass

Comments

[myrna_bird]

I already told you I think this is so beautiful. I am amazed how you could fast-forward the years and capture the heartache that Viola felt. You crafted such a soulful piece taking her out of the despair and longing and brought her back to a place of new hope. I LOVE it! Thank you. I knew we would be a good team!

[jacq22]

Well I decided I had to go forward or we would have had sex manual for the aged! LOL. No seriously I so enjoyed our partnership, and it made me think about where Viola might go in a big house in the country and alone. Thanks for the help, friendship and fun.

[myrna_bird]

Yes, as I have re-read our stories, I could think of lots of spin-offs. I guess maybe that's how whole novels get written! I am perfectly content with these short stories though. :)

[jacq22]

Write the novel!!! go for it.

[basric]

You need a tissue for this one after reading your partners. Well done, both of you.

[jacq22]

Thank you, but who knows she might start a Lady Chatterly spell?, LOL.

[path124]

Two more lovely reads. No wonder you are in the last few standing!

[jacq22]

Only two Aussies now, so we have to keep the flag flying.
Thanks for reading.

[den_lace]

I loved both stories, they kept me glued to the page (that hasn't happened for a very long time ..:)

[jacq22]

Thank you for taking time to read.

[jacq22]

Thank you.