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basric May 29 2012, 19:36:42 UTC
An excellent use of the prompt. I loved it, well done.

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jacq22 June 1 2012, 03:47:40 UTC
Thanks for reading ... having a health glitch so will be reading later today.

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pixiebelle June 2 2012, 04:36:56 UTC
How are you doing? I've been thinking about you and wondering how things are going?

Nicely done entry by the way, just wondering if everything is okay with you!

P.S. I believe you offered to let me as you as a friend awhile back. You seem like such a delightful person, I added you. I hope that's okay!

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jacq22 June 3 2012, 02:15:56 UTC
Love you to drop by as a friend. Welcome.
The health glitch was a pain in left arm which due to a few heart flutters might have been ominous.

But yay am still here! and today am working at normal speed, want to paint but have the reading etc to do first.

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jacq22 June 1 2012, 03:47:59 UTC
Nanny's rock!

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alien_infinity May 31 2012, 14:58:28 UTC
I enjoyed this, and you did well with using the prompt. :)

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jacq22 June 1 2012, 03:48:28 UTC
Thank you for taking time...

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jem0000000 May 31 2012, 18:05:15 UTC
Poor Jenny; I'm glad she got away.

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jacq22 June 1 2012, 03:48:55 UTC
Yes desperate situation.

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halfshellvenus May 31 2012, 21:27:03 UTC
Interesting name for a ship! The monster here was clearly Mr. Jones and not the ship itself. He likely would never have moved her mother from the almshouse, but rather fed Jenny that lie for as long as needed to get him what he wanted.

Such spirit in this character, including her determination to go forward no matter how difficult the memory she now carries.

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jacq22 June 1 2012, 03:47:00 UTC
Yes I wanted to describe him more but somehow never did it! Have had a distrscting week like many of us recently.

Yes he would never have helped the Mother, just a ploy to get the girl.
Thanks for reading intertesting times on lj.

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