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jacqg

[Four] Implied Consent: Dream a Little Dream of Me

Feb 26, 2011 19:14

Again, this story parallels Implied Consent. It is highly recommended you should read it too as a supplement to the future chapters.

XP I lied, there's drama,

Long chapter. Enjoy~

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Selca Four: Mood Indigo

Taeyeon frowned and she felt her ability to speak disappear. "I will be giving you a call in about two months as to where you ( Read more... )

fanfic, taeny

Comments 5

2jelly February 27 2011, 04:17:48 UTC

Mmm, I'm satisfied;D The drama was...very good, actually. I really enjoyed how you expressed the feelings of loneliness and desolation through Taeny's separation. And I love how you said their conversations got more awkward as time passed by, because that's exactly what would happen in real life ( ... )

jacqg February 27 2011, 04:56:26 UTC

Glad you like it haha. I wanted to give light to the reality that long distance relationships are really hard to maintain and most of the time they'll flop. Taeyeon had to leave because their lease was up xD it was vacation time or w/e. Tiffany touching herself, I wanted it to be a bit more subtle but it's ok it's over now. Sorry if it was startling. I really think Tiffany's not that innocent as she seems in this fic. Sure she's shy but not like she doesn't know anything.

Yes I wanted it to end with them seeing each other again which is why I waited until I finished this chapter before posting it. 8)

I hope there's no more drama because TaeNy's too perfect to be broken up <3. I just wanted to put this drama out there to transition to what happened to the YulSic implied consent. Tiffany came with Yoona and Taeyeon, along with Seohyun came during the party. I believe it was in Ch4 that yulsic went home and I mention that Tiffany's with Taeyeon. This is what happened during that time ( ... )

timhyun February 27 2011, 08:06:29 UTC

Would it be delusional of me to think that Taeyeon really does love Tiffany this much in real life?

Oh man, I am beyond satisfied with this story. Thank you so much! Wow. Just the right amount of drama. And it's just...gosh, the way you describe how in love they are with each other is so overwhelming, and just...gah, it makes my heart ache so much.

Thank you again, and good luck with school :)

jacqg February 27 2011, 22:09:46 UTC

She probably does. Lol.

I'm glad you like the story. I love TaeNy because they're so perfect and I'd like to show that with this fic. So far they really haven't made any mistakes with their relationships and the things that they do are so natural. <3. I hope that means that you like my fic lol.

^^ No problem, thanks I need all the luck I can get!

jeremymyhaven December 27 2011, 06:56:39 UTC

Hmm I agree.. long distance relationship usually don't work out... Although you love each other.. There would still be that loneliness, helplessness, and doubt that might one day eat you up... I'm just glad that Taeyeon is finally back... You really made me sad this time though.. emotions are heavy and they sort of.. clung to me hehe... Great chap.. Thanks...