Comments | jacqg: [Ten]Downfall.

jacqg

[Ten]Downfall.

Aug 03, 2010 23:06

Okay, PDF is available and a Yulsic version of the fic is also available. Initially, I outlined this as Yulsic but as I was writing I put yulti.

HERE.

I thank you. Thank you for reading this and I hope you will like the ending. Long author's note is presented after the story and it will explain the ambiguous parts of the fic.

One thing I would like ( Read more... )

yulti, fanfic

Comments 5

Nice one jouvalentine August 10 2010, 10:49:37 UTC

Hi,it's me again,XD,now I'm officially your fan! Honestly,this is good,although it's a little bitter in the middle, and I wish it could be longer... But oh well,I'll look forward for your other fictions eh =D

Re: Nice one jacqg August 10 2010, 18:58:43 UTC

oh lol I'm glad you like it xD I love this one too. I'm gonna make another yulti fic(but it won't be as heavy as downfall) eventually when I finish my other works. I have an ongoing at the moment and it's almost done so lol if you wanna read that it's on soshified. It's called project 365. If you don't have an account let me know :P and I'll link you.

^^

I almost forgot jouvalentine August 10 2010, 10:54:10 UTC

Oh yeah,I almost forgot to tell you.. Your userpic is so darn cute,can I steal it?XD

Re: I almost forgot jacqg August 10 2010, 18:58:59 UTC

lol I stole it somewhere too but sure :P

ext_557465 September 26 2011, 13:52:53 UTC

This is the second work of yours that you've read after Sushified *^^* This was quite a while ago...
Back to story. First of all, the YulTi tag captured my eyes ^^ And I'm glad it did. I really liked your fic. It's beautifully written =)
The pace of the story wasn't too slow or too fast. I found it great that you switched the POVs only two times in the whole fic. It's pretty confusing when writers constantly change POV.
I liked the characters and how you made them interact, how their relationship seemed to flow as if they had known each other since forever. Yuri seemed to be very aware of her emotions and feelings while Tiffany didn't even think of why she's doing this or that. The story broke my heart. I cried thinking of how stupid Tiffany was, rejecting Yuri like that and seeing how broken the latter was... And the ending TT___TT

I'm babbling too much, aren't I ? ^^; Btw, are you going to update Sushified ? I saw on SSF that there was a fourth part of it but couldn't find it here, so...