[Prologue] Implied Consent

[jacqg]

 Prologue
You arrive home and you notice that the kitchen light was the only object illuminating the entire loft. You walk past the living room, going directly to the dining area, not even giving a damn about the dust that your sneakers are spreading throughout your path. You see her resting her back on the counter, reading the package of the

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[vtension]

Very nice writing, although I can't say that I want the chapters to be in 2nd person. And I'm sorry, but I laughed when Yuri said "Just say it". It reminded me of twilight lol

lol

[jacqg]

V, of all things lol Twilight. I am quite bitter about twilight tbh.
I can't make a couple name with Jacob. Jacq + Jacob.

[aznchicken3]

Nice prolouge. I'm going to guess YulSic are roomates of some sort since it's pre debut right?
Another thing is I like how you're trying 2nd person but it kinda weird to read. Can't explain why though.

Don't get discouraged keep writing. =)

[jacqg]

I made a poll about it and people voted that the 2nd person pov is ok. I guess it's weird to read because there are no 2nd person fics, well I've never seen one(which is why I write this).

I'm already in the process of writing ch2 lol I have to continue xD.

[tsents]

Oh cuuute~~ Yes, I third the above! Do keep writing. I personally feel that (as a general rule), stories written in second person perspective are awkward, but maybe that's just me. I'm hoping you're not continuing the rest of the story in this POV, but the story's tempting enough for me to keep on reading for now anyways. ^_^

[jacqg]

I apologize but it's 2nd person o_o. I challenge you to widen your scope, I've never seen it done, which is why I'm attempting it.

[kotegawa87]

wwwoooo
this fic is awesome... wooo
i don't have word for describe this... actually i have but... just in spanish... jojo sorry my english is really bad ):
but ... i really like it!
(:
i read a lot of your fic... and i'm your fan... (:
i hope this one continues... (jojojo i wanna read the hot part... between sica and yuri jojojo)

thanks...

[jacqg]

Lol thank you. I speak some spanish. Soy de Miami lololol.

Um, here's a hot snippet of what I wrote last night for it. It's not up yet lol.

You swallow hard while resisting the temptation in front of you.

“Goodnight.” You say while turning to the opposite way. You close your eyes as you arrive in your room. Finally, you lie on your bed and you relax.

You mentally curse at yourself at the fact that she makes you feel lonely in bed.

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Hope you liked it lol and <3 thanks, I hope you reply to my posts lol

[kotegawa87]

damn it!
... OMG! jojojo i like... woo...
jojojo... I hope you update soon... (:
really you speak some spanish :D
que genial!!
well... getting back to the fic... wooo i wanna read the first chapter... really awesome...(:

and I repeat you're a great writter... (:

[jacqg]

aw shucks.

Yeah just some. I stopped bothering when I got tired of trying to understand everyone lol so I just say, "Uh I don't know spanish".

Chapter will be up idk when but probably soon. :D Writing ch3 at the moment.

[timhyun]

I like it so far :)

Personally, I don't mind you writing in 2nd person, it's definitely different from other fanfics.

And I wanted to ask, will the future chapters always be written in Yuri's POV?

[jacqg]

yup, it will be in Yuri's pov.