[8/10] Implied Consent

[jacqg]

 Ehh sorry I've been busy!(chyeah, playing Ragnarok Online and reading fanfics).

Halfway done through the finale for this fic~~~.

Author's Notes below. <3.

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Selca 8: Reset
You drink your beer and you see them sitting on the couch across you. Jaejoong is obviously drunk with his hand on Jessica and Jessica leaning on his arm.

Comments

[ext_325727]

i like your fanfic so much,so please continue your update!!

[jacqg]

Why thank you ^ ^. I will update soon enough

[kkabyul_13]

i'll be looking forward to the next chapter :)
love your fic ^^

[jacqg]

Thanks ^ ^!

hey jacqq

[kkabyul_13]

do you have a facebook account ? ^^

Re: hey jacqq

[jacqg]

ahaha yes but it's only for people I know in real life >< I apologize!!

[skies0920]

yay! yulsic got back together! but i shouldn't get too excited, should i.
"Nuff said, son. If I raped you last chapter, then I'm murdering you in the next.

And.you.will.enjoy.it.

then you will go WTF."

hehe, you know us too well. thanks for writing!

[jacqg]

I don't know. maybe my rape might be kinda fail. I hope not. :[.

[mackerel14409]

.....GOOD.

[jacqg]

...Thanks.

[ohsugarandsalt]

In reference to your writer's note at the bottom.

Perhaps, it wasn't the plot device that you used that got you mixed reactions from. Rather, you could have kind of...suggested Jessica's flighty side to her character and fleshed it out a bit more? Like, of course, you've written this from Yuri's perspective so it's a bit harder to understand Jessica. But to a certain extent, it might have been helpful to kind have incorporated a scene where it made readers think that Jessica was capable of resorting to Jaejoong to make Yuri jealous or sad..or whatever.

Of course, this is just my opinion. I really read alot so I could be totally wrong. Anyway, your little rant at the end sounded very Arts-y, you don't happen to be an Arts student by any chance?

[jacqg]

Eh, true. I tend to be hasty with my writing especially in areas like that. I often think that people would get it lol D':.. I believe that it can still be redeemed when I drop ch9. I'm one scene away from completing 10 so as soon as I finish, I'm going to make some parts more concrete.

lol, um no I'm not an arts student. I do photography as a hobby but not really majoring in arts or anything. Chem major but just pre-pharmacy. xD.

Hrm just wondering, do you own msn?

[ohsugarandsalt]

Ah ok, well I guess it depends how you write.

Yeah, I do. Add me at ohsugarandsalt@hotmail.com :).

[jacqg]

sweetness, I just added you. I hope you got it o.o... mine is 10sHii @ live.com