Looking at this one, I feel like the best thing is that you drew it from a bigger size, so when you shrink it down, it creates a great effect.
The part that is well done is the underwater part, where you have created a stunning view and overall a great atmosphere.
The part that I feel might need work is the surface of the water, where the splashing doesn't seem very realistic, but I was thinking that maybe you were going for stylized splashes there, rather than realistic splashes, so i might be misintepreting.
I think you have spent a lot of time on the fish, from what I can see. It's the most developed part of the painting, which is great because it also seems like the natural focal point to me.
Overall, the composition is cool. The execution is good, except for the unrealistic looking water. I'm still loving the way you give your lines that sublime quality by changing their breadth from thick to thin.
lady u shud b an art critque i did start of with the fish by the time i got to the top part of the water i didnt really wanna draw on it any more sence the under water took so much out of me
ur the first person in a long time to say somthin other then ( tht look solid dred ) to me usualy ppl jus tell me my drawings look nice or w.e or ask me to draw them. u hav any pics of ur paintins online id like to c if thts cool i wont give u any indebt or thoughtful critisim cus it wud probley hurt my brain but i will stare at it long if it is epic
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The part that is well done is the underwater part, where you have created a stunning view and overall a great atmosphere.
The part that I feel might need work is the surface of the water, where the splashing doesn't seem very realistic, but I was thinking that maybe you were going for stylized splashes there, rather than realistic splashes, so i might be misintepreting.
I think you have spent a lot of time on the fish, from what I can see. It's the most developed part of the painting, which is great because it also seems like the natural focal point to me.
Overall, the composition is cool. The execution is good, except for the unrealistic looking water. I'm still loving the way you give your lines that sublime quality by changing their breadth from thick to thin.
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I know what you mean. Sometimes, when I spend too long on a painting, I just wanna throw it away somewhere and never see it again.
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