Comments | jade_elephant: So very pretty

jade_elephant

Aug 23, 2005 14:57

this is a poem called "THE FINAL INSPECTION ( Read more... )

Comments 3

luciendusoleil August 23 2005, 19:41:14 UTC

Its nice, peaceful, hopeful, optimisitic. Reminds me of several people i knew/know.

loupi August 24 2005, 13:44:45 UTC

Very nice, I especially like the exit line.

solitarylycan42 August 24 2005, 18:38:24 UTC

I likes it...me thinks I send it to my bro and dee rest o' my family. They would all like it.