Exit Strategy Chapter 7

Oct 28, 2010 01:37


Title: Exit Strategy, Ch 7
Rating: PG-13
Genre: Humor, romance, (slight) angst, fluff
Pairings: jock!US/school president!UK
Warning: Language, Arthur's brothers, Alfred's mind going places
Summary: High school AU. It all started with Arthur snapping when he'd been fed up with Alfred's stupid teasing. And now....now he can't help but think he's signed ( Read more... )

us/uk, exit strategy, hetalia, au, fanfiction

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maiyeng October 28 2010, 11:39:20 UTC
Nice background to Alfred's family! I wasn't expecting a younger sister, but there's a need for a bit of turbulence in family life, right? XD Interested in seeing more interactions with Alfred and his younger adopted sister!

Alfred's meeting with Arthur's brothers was pretty intense. Oh, how they care about their kid brother, in their own way. ^^;

Thanks for throwing a little something now and then throughout the fic, like Al's mind going into the gutter, the mini skirt comment, etc. =) Those served well before the main course. =9~
Al's comment about Arthur's eyes was so sweet~!<3

And Yay for Scott Pilgrim references! =D (Yes, Wallace was awesome!)

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galeaya October 28 2010, 11:53:01 UTC
XDDD that was a super super super GREAT update... always leave them wanting for more, eh? XDD

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chiisana00 October 28 2010, 13:18:42 UTC
The last name question had been odd at first, Anna having kept her own last name, but they settled on giving each boy a different one, so Alfred Jones and Matthew Williams came into the world. Lolwut?! xD

Where did the idea of Maria came from anyway? It was so unexpected =O Though she acts more like a random filler for Alfred's annoyance =w=

So loving the brothers part xD So freaking scary, lol~ And this; “I have no problem going back to prison.” Holy crap that was scary as hell xD

“I have no problem going back to prison.” Loooool~ Intentional much, Jade? xD

Awww the ending was so cute~~~~~~ -MELTS- Yes yes, Arthur totally wants mor--- -SHOT-

Same shit! Can't wait for next chapter QwQ And do remember to join PChat at weekend <3

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hotbabysitter October 28 2010, 14:54:16 UTC
ahahhahah I loved this chapter more than usual because of well yeah. Everything.

I should draw you Maria now.

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cale October 28 2010, 15:27:45 UTC
Ah, reading this has made my dreary day so much more brighter. Thanks for putting me back into my US/UK happy place. ♥

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