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Title: The Irony
Author: MorbidMordred
Pairing: Soubi/Ritsuka
Rating: I’m going to change this to R just to play it safe.
Disclaimer: I don't own 'em, I don’t know the person who does own them. I gain no profit from this. I just like to play with them sometimes. I'm just a deranged girl with too much time on my hands.
Warnings: Abuse
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Author: MorbidMordred
Pairing: Soubi/Ritsuka
Rating: I’m going to change this to R just to play it safe.
Disclaimer: I don't own 'em, I don’t know the person who does own them. I gain no profit from this. I just like to play with them sometimes. I'm just a deranged girl with too much time on my hands.
Warnings: Abuse
Summary: ( Read more... )
Comments 1
The narrative is slow and then fast-paced at some points, which serves as a good way to keep the attention and then fill me with dread of what is to come.
I love how your portray Ritsuka, both frail and strong depending on his train of thoughts and the particular circumstances of the difficult situations he lives.
It is sad how normally both Ritsuka and Soubi discuss the topic of the sacrifice's wounds, but it is very canon and realistic taking into consideration the Loveless verse.
I particularly loved the growing emotional intimacy between them. And how steadfast and secure Soubi presents himself for the sake of Ritsuka, in spite of the Fighter being a very abused person himself.
All in all, great continuation. Please update soon too!
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And may I make these little comments? The format of your LJ makes it a little bit difficult to find the "comment" button. And sometimes your initial Author Notes are joined with the first sentence of the story, thus creating a bit of confusion ( ... )
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