Lots of irons in the fire here, many things ( Read more... )

1. Are you going to intensively outline this like you have the others ( Read more... )

Yesterday we watered down the Swan Lake story until you shut the computer is disgust and moped around the house for three hours. Let's examine why you hated it so much, so that later when it's actually time to sit down and do stuff, you are able to do anygoddamnthing ( Read more... )

Yesterday we thought about an online relationship between our swan and our prince. I really like that idea, but it's so far away from the original it was jarring. It would mean swapping our white and black swan characters, and dropping Siegfried all together. You can still have your boy's school setup, with Dr Bard being the headmaster and his ( Read more... )

Or not. Um...I have no idea how to make magic realistic. That's...kind of an oxymoron ( Read more... )

We're gonna march all day all night all day ( Read more... )

First, some angst ( Read more... )

It's awfully convenient, isn't it? You end up with two of your MC's having superpowers and weird resurrection quality. You don't actually know how it works, so let's talk about that for a minute ( Read more... )

We seem to have painted ourself into a corner, regarding that mutiny. I like the way the outline's going but I have NO IDEA where it came from or where it's going. I have, however, learned to trust this sort of happenstance ( Read more... )

Ok, Big Epic Battle time, starring the Champions and all our mains. I like the three good (asterisk Suzette) guys going into the misty country to duke it out with the DG. What if they used Wolfgang as their portal that ways ( Read more... )