But your lyrics sucked cock! (in a bad way) Try not writing like Evanescence every single time. You always use the same concept, and it's always some cliche pseudo goth poetry. Read the lines, and REALLY think about what you're saying. The metaphors are based on commercial conepts, and hardly are clever or meaningful. They're all there to describe some emo/goth thing that we've all heard before.
Try to really capture your sadness and lonliness through different ideas, study some great gothic writers, starting with Poe. They certaintly brought fresh twists to the reader, not the same versus of what is perceived to be good words to describe sadness.
You have such a wonderful talent, but you're becoming a redundant writer.
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ive cried twice today.
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But your lyrics sucked cock! (in a bad way)
Try not writing like Evanescence every single time.
You always use the same concept, and it's always
some cliche pseudo goth poetry. Read the lines,
and REALLY think about what you're saying.
The metaphors are based on commercial conepts,
and hardly are clever or meaningful.
They're all there to describe some emo/goth
thing that we've all heard before.
Try to really capture your sadness and lonliness
through different ideas, study some great gothic writers,
starting with Poe. They certaintly brought fresh twists
to the reader, not the same versus of what is perceived
to be good words to describe sadness.
You have such a wonderful talent,
but you're becoming a redundant writer.
Love ya. Can't wait to see you.
-W
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got your back there. no use writing an honest comment if there are spelling mistakes.
X,
spell check
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What use is there giving your friend
some useful advice from the heart,
if there's a single spelling error?
Point totally over your head :P
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