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KOTO: SECOND FIGHT, SADAKO VS. KUWABARA BEGIN!!
SADAKO: FIGURES. I TRAIN FOR AN ENTIRE TWO MONTHS AND WHAT IS MY REWARD? YOU. THE WEAKEST MEMBER OF TEAM URAMESHI. YOU HADE BETTER PUT ON SOMEHTING OF A SHOW FOR ME, HUMAN.
KUWABARA: GRRR WHO YOU CALLIN' WEAK? I'LL SHOW YOU THING OR TWO.
SADAKO: FIGHT ME THEN.
KUWABARA: EAT THIS SHRIMP!!!!
HE LAUNCHES AT SADAKO, FISTS PULLED BACK.
KUWARABA: I'LL HAVE YOU KNOW I'M THE TOUGHEST FIGHTER AT SARAYASHIKI JR.
HIGH.
YUSUKE: *OFF STAGE* FEH, YEAH, YOU WISH.
KUWABARA: YE'RE GOIN' DOWN!!!! HE LANDS THE PUNCH AND TO HIS SUPRISE, SADAKO HAS DISAPEARED.
KUWABARA: UHN...WHERE...WHERE DID SHE GO? BEHIND ME? ABOVE ME? BELOW?
SADAKO: HEH HEH.
KUWABARA: ?! S
ADAKO: SURELY YOU CAN DO BETTER THAN THAT. SHE LANDS A PUNCH ON HIM AND HE FLIES FOREWARD.
KIEKO: THAT HUMAN DOESN'T STAND A CHANCE!! COME ON, SADAKO, TEAR THAT HUMAN APART!!!
CHIHIRO: WHAT? BUT THAT'S SO MEAN.
KIEKO: ARE YOU REALLY THAT NAIVE AND STUPID? THAT'S THE WHOLE POINT OF THIS TOURNAMENT.
CHIHIRO: SADAKO, YOU'RE BEING SO MEAN!!!!
KIEKO: UGH!!! *SMACKS FOREHEAD*
SADAKO: OH SHUT UP!!!! YOU STILL DON'T RECOGNIZE THE TRUE PURPOSE OF THIS TOURNAMENT, DO YOU? SHE PUNCHES KUWABARA AGAIN.
SADAKO: IT'S A KILL OR BE KILLED WORLD, LITTERALLY. YOU EITHER FIGHT OR DIE. KUWABARA: AUUGHH!!!!! HE GOES FLYING AGAIN.
SAKAO: HEH. SHE PUTS HER HANDS OUT, FLAMES APPEAR. SADAKO: THEY DON;T CALL ME THE INFAMOUS FIRE SHINOBI FOR NOTHING!!!! THIS ATTACK IS JUST ABOUT RIGHT. THE SIGN OF MARS APPEARS IN HER HAND.
SADAKO: LET'S GIVE A TOAST....TO THE FIRE I HAVE HARNESSED, THE FIRE OF MARS!!! FLAMING SYMBOL OF MARS, FRY THAT HUMAN!!!!! SHE LAUNCHES THE SYMBOL AND IT HITS KUWABARA HEAD ON.
SADAKO: YOU CAN REST IN CINDERS!!! I'LL BURN YOU TO A CRISP!!!!! KUWBARA LIES OF THE ARENA FLOOR.'
KOTOT: WELL, THAT WAS OVER FAST. ONE...TWO...THREE...
YUSUEK: YOU...YOU BITCH. SADAKO TURNS TO LOOK AT HIM/
SADAKO: OH COME NOW, DON'T BE RUDE. I DID WHAT WAS NESSCARY. SHE LOOKS AT KUWABARA.
SADAKO: HEH. HE'S LUCKY. HE DIED BEOFRE THE FIRE COULD ACTUALLY GET TO HIM. YUSUKE: *GRINNING* DON'T BE SO SURE.
SADKAO: ?! SHE TURNS TO SEE KUWABARA BACK UP.
KUWBABA; I'M...I'M BACK UP!! LET'S FINISH THIS.
SADAKO: UHN!!!! HE SURVIDED IT? BUT...IMPOSSIBLE!!!! NOBOSY GETS UP AFTER THEY'VE BEEN AT THE MERCY F THE FLAMING SYMBOL OF MARS!!!! HOW CAN THIS BE?
KOTO: KUWABARA'S BACK, UP, THE FIGHT WILL RESUME.
SADAKO SHAKES HER HEAD.
SADAKO: REST ASSURED KUWABARA. ALTHOUGH WE ARE ENEMIES, I HAD HOPED IT WOULDN'T COME TO THIS. HOWEVER...
SHE LIFTS UP THE SLIT OF HER DRESS TO REVEALA LEG GARTER AND SEVERAL TALISMANS. UPON SEEING THE GARTER, SVERAL DEMON MEN START MAKING CAT CALLS.
SADAKO: YOU LEAVE ME NO CHOICE
DEMON ONE: WHOOHOO!!! TAKE IT OFF, TAKE IT OFF!!
DEMON TWO: WANNA GET DOWN AND DIRTY TO CELEBRATE YOUR VICTORY?
DEMON THREE: NOW WAY I'M GONNA BE THE ONE TO FUCK HER FIRST!!!!
DEMON FOUR: NO I AM.
DEMON FIVE: I AM!!!!
SADAKO: HEH HEH. I'M SO FLATTERED. BUT NOW...
SHE TAKES OUT THE TALISMAN CARDS SO THAT THERE ARE FOUR IN EACH HANDS.
SADAKO: I SUMMON THY POWER!!!!! COME TO ME, ARMY OF THE DEAD!!!!!!
THE ENTIRE GROIND BEGINS TO SHAKE AS A BGACK AND RED AURA SURROUNDS SADAKO.
SADAKO: COME OUT AND PLAY!!!!
KIEKO: IM..IMPOSSIBLE!!! SHE COULDN'T HAVE MASTERED THIS ATTACK IN JUST TWO MONTHS. NOT EVEN THE MOST POWERFUL DEMONS CAN DO IT!!!!!! TEN CORPSES APPEAR BEHIND SADAKO.
SADAKO: I GIVE YOU MY ARMY OF THE DEAD!!! WELL, WHAT DO YOU THINK? IMPRESSIVE, AREN'T THEY? I HAVE EN ENTIRE COLLECTION OF CORPSES TO DO MY BIDDING.
HIEI: THE CORPSE CONTROLLER.
SADAKO: THAT'S RIGHT. SHE LIFTS UP A TALISMAN. SADAKO" I
'LL USE THE LEGENDAY GENGIS KHAN TO FIGHT YOU!!!!! COME MY WARRIOR!!! GENGIS KHAN!!!! THE CORPSE OF GENGIS KAHN APPEARS.
KUWABARA: NO...NO WAY!!
SADAKO: BEAUTIFUL ISN;T HE? THIS CORPSE IS GENGIS KHAN HIMSELF, THE FINEST WEAPON THAT HAS EVER COME INO MY SERIVICES.
UWABARA: HEH. HEH HEH.
SADAKO: AND JUST WHAT IS SO FUNNY, HUMAN?
KUWABARA: CORPSES ARE VERY FRAGILE RIGHT? I CAN JUST SPILT YOUR STUPID KHAN IN HALF . HEEYAAAAAAAAA!!!!!
SADAKOL HEH. KAHN!!! SWORD SLICE!!!! TEACH THIS PATHETIC WASTE WE MEAN BUSSINESS. KAHAN: HAHHHHHH!!!!!!
KUWABARA: I HAVE TO WIN!!!!
SADAKO: DON'T BE SO SURE. MY MARRIONETTE IS GENGIS KHAN HIMSELF. HIS POWERS HAVE BEEN REBORN TO SERVE ME.
KOTO: THE FIGHT HAS BEEN GOING ON FOR QUITE SOME TIME, BUT IT'S CLEAR THAT THE CORPSE HAS THE UPPER HAND. OH!!!!!!! DID YOU SEE THAT/ THAT SWORD SLICE JUST MISSED KUWABARA'S NECK..
. KUWABARA: ACK!!!
KOTOT: OH!!!!! KUWABARA;S LEFT EAR HAS BEEN TORN APART!!!!
SADAKO: THAT'S NOT ALL I CAN MAKE KAHN DO. KAHN RAISES KUWABARA UP SO HE IS AT EYE LEVEL WITH SADAKO.
SADAKO: DO YOU UNDERSTAND NOW: YOU HAVE NO CHANCE OF BEATING ME.
SADAKO: I'M IN NO MOOD TO KILL YOU, SO I WILL ASK YOU ONE FINAL TIME.
KUWABARA: GUH...
SADAKO: HAND OVER THE MATCH OR ELSE.
KUWABARA: NO....I WON'T
SADAKO: *SHRUGS* FINE HAVE IT YOUR WAY. *LUDLY* DID YOU HEAR THAT EVERYONE? THE HUMAN SAYS HE'D RATHER DIE. WELL? SHOULD I GRANT HIM HIS WISH?
CROWD: YEA!!!! KILL THAT HUMAN BASTARD!!!!!!
SHE TAKES OUT A TALISMAN, SLICES HER FINGER AND STARTS WRTING ON IT WITH HER BLOOD.
SADAKO: YOU ASKED FOR IT!!!
SHE PRODUCES THE CARD. IN JAPANESE IT READS EXECUTION.
SADAKO: KHAN!!!! ATTACK!!!!! DO WHAT YOU WANT WITH HIM, BUT DON'T STOP UNTIL HE'S DEAD.
THE SLIP STICKS TO KAHNS FOREHEAD, AND HE THROWS KUWABARA UP 45 FEET IN THE AIR. KHAN KICKES KUWABARA IN THE STOMACTH, AND DELIVERS FIVE BLOWS TO THE BACK OF THE NECK.
YUSUKE: KUWABARA CALL IT!!!! YOU CAN'T BEAT HER!!!!
SADAKO: LISTEN TO YOUR FRIEND, HUMAN *KUWABARA* SAVE YOURSELF A HUMILATING AND PAINFUL DEATH AND HAND OVER THE MATCH.
KUWABARA: SHUT---SHUT---GUH---ACK!!!!!
SADAKO LAUGHS AS HE COUGHS UP BLOOD.
SADAKO: YOU DON'T HAVE A CHANCE. MY PUPPET TO GENGIS KHAN HIMSELF. KAHN RIPS KUWABARA'S SWORD IN TWO.
SADAKO: THAT STUPID SWORD WILL GET YOU NO FARTHER. YOU COULDN'T KILL A FLEA WITH THAT THING!!!!!! FIVE MINUTES LATER, KUWABARA IS ON THE GROUND, UNDER KHANS FOOT.
SADAKO: HEH. THAT'S ENOUGH KHAN. THE HUMAN WILL BE DEAD SOON ANYWAY.
YUSUKE: YOU...YOU BITCH!!!! SADAKO TURNS TO HIM.
YUSUKE: KUWABARA HAD NO CHANCE AND YOU KNOW IT!!!! YOU BEAT OVER HALF TO DEATH.
SADAKO: YEA? SO? I GAVE HIM A WARNING, AND HE DIDN'T TAKE IT. IT'S REALLY HIS FAULT.
KOTO: ONE...TWO...THREE...FOUR...
SADAKO: *TO KUWABARA* YOU'RE LUCKY. YOU PASSED OUT BEFORE YOU GOT KILLED. YOU WON'T BE GETTING UP ANYTIME SOON, I GUARANTEE IT.
KUWBARA: GUH....
YUIKNA:*CRYING*
SADAKO: WHEN I SAID ID DIDN'T WANT OT KILL YOU, I MEANT. BUT YO0UR STUBBORNESS BROUGHT THIS SUFFERING. HMM. I HAVE A GREAT IDEA. HOW ABOUT I MAKE YOU A LITTLE DEAL. IF YOU HAND THE MACTH OVER TO ME WITHOUT COMPLAINT, I WILL GO OUT OF MY WAY TO EHAL YOU WITH MY POWERS. WELL? WHAT DO YOU SAY HUMAN?
KUWABARA: I ONCE MADE...ACK...A VOW..NN...NOT..NOT...TO QUIT A FIGHT...I'LL WIN IT...OR DIE TRYING..GUH.
SADAKO: YOU'RE A FOOL., AND YOU WILL SURELY DIE FOR IT, KUWABARA KAZUMA.
KUWABARA: GUH...
SADAKO: I PITY YOU KUWABARA. PITY ALL HUMANS. YOU'VE SET AGAL FOR YOURSELF, AND ONE YOU CANNOUT EVER ACHIVE UNLESS YOU GET SERIOUS ABOUT THIS. I'M SORRY, BUT YOU LEFT ME HNO CHOICE. i CAN STILL SAVE YOUR LIFE, BUT YOU MUST LET ME BECOME THE WINNRER.
KUWABARA: I TOLD YOU BEFORE, I'M NOT GIVING UP. I'LL WIN THIS, OR DIE TRYING,
SADAKO: WELL THEN, YOU'VE DECIDED YOUR OWN FATE.
SHE BITES HER FINGER AND WIRTES SOMEHTING IN THE AIR. THE SYMBOL FOR EXECUTION APPEARS AND SLAMS INTO KHAN.
SADAKO: KHAN. THIS TIME YOU WILL NOT HOLD BACK. KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!! bUT DO IT QUICK. ALL THIS CORPSE PUPPETRY IS MAKING ME TIRED.
FIVE MINUTES LATER, KUWABARA LIES ON THE GROUND DEAD.
SADAKO: HEH, YOU ARE FOOLISH, BUT NOT COWARDLY. BECASUE YOU WERE THE FIRST ONE TO EVER SHOW BRAVERY AGINST ME, I WILL BRING YOU BACK TO LIFE. BUT ON ONE CONDITON. YOU MUST NEVER CHALLANGE ME AGAIN.
YUSUKE: *PISSED OFF AS HELL*
SADAKO: DO NOT WORRY, YUSUKE. YOUR FRIEND WILL LIVE, I CAN GURANTEE IT.
THE END.