Something I Think Of When I Hurt

[jadedgrayson]

As the sun finally sank past the waterline, Jordan sank to her knees on the floating dock. The sky still had a bright, orange, fresh view, but the air had become that crisp, cold snap of summer night. She knew she shouldn't be out there, but Jimmy Rafferty dared her to go, and now, she was stuck. Jimmy had run off, after taunting her and chiding

Comments

[bugbelly]

Another good story. You have a knack for writing from a kid's perspective. Love it!

[jadedgrayson]

Sometimes I just feel like a kid...with an extended vocabulary and a good imagination.