Jitterbug flick

[jadedhellspawn]

Well my stories are still coming along but I felt like posting some type of writing. I wrote this poem a while ago, recently found it so here goes

Comments

[iconocast]

i love the pacing on this.

and i loved this line: "bitter lick after bitter flick"

[jadedhellspawn]

woohoo! my first comment. Thanks for reading it. I was unsure what to think of it after a wrote it, but its now something that I am actually proud of. Thanks again for the comments.

[iconocast]

you're welcome...i just got my latest bit of prose up *shrug* not really something i love, just felt like it complimented my day

[mttpitbull]

Dude that was great.The choice of words were excellent and i liked the way it flowed you should definatly post more when you write them.

[jadedhellspawn]

Thanks a lot. I hope to post more soon.

[iconocast]

well, post some more, dangit!

[jadedhellspawn]

okay...okay. I'll post one this coming week for sure.

[iconocast]

:o)

[lonelydoll]

I'll place a book of your poetry on my shelf, in between Gingsberg and Kerouac. :)

[jadedhellspawn]

If such a thing ever comes then you shall get the first copy.