Dolly do we part?

[jadedhellspawn]

By request here goes another poem. It's far from new and far from polished, but I like it for various reasons. It just made so much sense when I wrote it. Anyways, have at it

Comments

[iconocast]

i like this one, too. the sporatic use of punctuation makes it a little hard to read, but it also leaves the interpretation up to the reader.

[jadedhellspawn]

Thanks for reading. I always feel odd about putting punctuation in poem type things. For some reason I'm a fan of question marks, I guess its because of the open ended'ness of them. I've been using them a lot lately, and looking back on something like this I guess I used them then too.

[mttpitbull]

Another great poem dude keep posting these theyre awesome.

[jadedhellspawn]

thanks a lot dude. Same goes for you, I'll keep an eye for your stuff.