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[jademaverick]

I'm taking this to writer's guild tonight so I think it's safe to put this on here at the same time. I'm looking for opinions and critiques. It's only my second and third drafts. That's another thing. Which draft to people prefer? It's a work in progress.

Don't Tell Me I Look Like Her. (Title?)

You stopped holding me when I learned to walk.
I never

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[mitad_del_mundo]

I meant to reply to this a while ago, and I know you've already taken it to Writers Guild, but here goes