III. Training

Aug 10, 2004 22:17

Title: Training
Category: Q/O, action
Rating: PG
Disclaimer: Oh, come *on*!
Notes: Part of a series of standalone stories. NOT A WIP!  Previous fics in the series can be found in my memoriesGreen clashed against blue with a vengeance, electrifying the quiet surround. Striking and countering with elegant force, the glowing blades moved in perfect ( Read more... )

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mrshamill August 11 2004, 06:35:43 UTC
Damn this was good, I envy you your description of the fight. I have more problems with that kind of thing than anything else. But with you, I could see each blow, and that was utterly cool.

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jadyn August 11 2004, 07:00:09 UTC
You just made my day, Terri! You totally made my day. =) I actually forced myself to write a fighting piece because I wasn't sure if I could.

That you could "see" each blow even though it wasn't exactly a play-by-play... woohoo! Thank you! =D

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