Beautiful You Ch. 2

May 14, 2008 22:47

Title: Beautiful You
Length: Threeshot
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title: beautiful you, p: yunhoxjaejoong

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asuka2507 May 14 2008, 21:19:31 UTC
ok... i remeber u once said that a yaoi manga leads u to this right... hmmm i have a feeking ive read it before.. i forgot the title.. huhuhu... but its interesting... hmmm i think better by lenght if by chapter i dont know how long u will be finishing this...XD

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eekkee May 14 2008, 21:32:01 UTC
Awww...Yunho! This is his tenth time falling in love? Poor boy =/. Please don't disappoint him, Jae. *winks*

You've got a great start on your story! I'm enjoying the fluff!

I think you should extend your fic to more chapters. Isn't there much more you can cover with the storyline? =)

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warda_jaejin May 14 2008, 22:51:18 UTC
OOO!! Cliff-hanger~ cliff-hanger~~

XD!! let it continueeeee~~
im already in a mood of reading moreee~

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kattan69 May 14 2008, 23:12:23 UTC
It doesn't matter as long as you have us entertained with your story.

As there is still no Jaeho developments, I really doubt how Yunho going to 'get' Jae.

Just cut down the descriptions and go straight to the point (the meeting, chasing and falling in love), then you will be able to finish within your chapter frame.

Good luck!

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irerd_taga May 14 2008, 23:45:42 UTC
Going with the flow eh Yunho?! He's not going to believe the rumours about Jae, is he?
One or more chapters of this is more than ok by me. I like this cute Yunho and snarky Changmin.

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