She's My Shadow: Chapter 1

Mar 12, 2011 19:08

*warning: starts off with mild smut ( Read more... )

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prettyyoosu March 13 2011, 02:03:12 UTC
you seemed to be adamant on getting comments on Sky, lol...
i wonder if sky is you *wink*, well, i'm sure you have your reasons and i think one of that is because she's the central character of your story.
on your winglin post i said i'd be off to reading,now, i'll comment here, instead.

what do i think of Sky?
sometimes i like her and sometimes i don't...
i don't hate her because it's a strong word for me...i don't hate..i love, lol...
but it's a good thing because it means she has an impact on me.
i like her because she's not really holding back Chunbut i have a strong feeling she would...soon [with the appearance of my favorite duckbutt, it's bound to happen.
it's in fact Chun who is not letting go as of the moment.
i like her a lot when she distances herself and gives him space....
but then i don't like her that much when she's slightly jealous and insecure.
but i understand her...she's not ready to move on...
but her dark tones indicate she's bound to be difficult on Chunnie...soon.

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prettyyoosu March 13 2011, 02:06:48 UTC
ohh...and before i forget...
i am not disappointed with this update...
but i would if it takes you too long to post the next...
but you should do your homework first...don't be like my lazy ass daughter whose mind is clouded with Jaejae 24/7, lol.

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jaejoongloverr4 March 13 2011, 03:13:15 UTC
Thank you! Your comment means a lot and your feedback is really helpful! Hahaha, okay I'll do my homework too. Don't be disappointed with my updates! And thank you so much for reading!
As for the comment about sky being me, lol thats not true. Actually she's probably the one that is least like me in the stories i make! Weirdd..
Well thank you for your comment and keep reading! :D <3

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namelesshachi March 13 2011, 06:02:04 UTC
wooa o,o this sounds interesting! i'll be waiting for more then! 8DD

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jaejoongloverr4 March 13 2011, 12:29:08 UTC
Haha thanks! Keep checking up for updates! (:

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purpleinpink March 13 2011, 13:37:37 UTC
Hey, fast update!! :DD

Okay, about Sky. I think she loves Yoochun a lot, but somehow I got a feeling that she's insecure. I mean she's a ghost now, and well maybe she's afraid that YC will find someone new, and her tone when she tells YC not to fall in love, to me it sounds a bit possessive.

and Junsu is here already!! I'll wait for more :)

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jaejoongloverr4 March 13 2011, 21:06:09 UTC
Hahah thank you for your feedback! The other chapters are coming soon- although probably not as fast as this one did- but keep reading! :D <3

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aleen94 March 14 2011, 16:56:56 UTC
sky is really possessive ne?
chun already attracted to su in their first meeting!!

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jaejoongloverr4 March 14 2011, 19:26:17 UTC
haha yup! love at first sight of course for the yoosu couple! :D
I'm working on the next chapter right now, probably will be up late today ! :) or maybe tomorrow.. :/

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