For Olorime on her birthday. A couple takes a romantic walk in the woods, and a blindfold is involved. From the Not Fade Away storyverse. Haldir; OFC. Rated PG 2011 MEFA Third Place Winner.
I had wondered if they had got together - how nice to know. I got some inkling of that last line when you mentioned that he had waited until the tree was at its peak - what a good way to celebrate, for them.
Oh, how wonderful... and bittersweet of course. I'm glad that the two of them got together for a long term relationship, I assumed they would, but it's nice to have that confirmation! :)
Very nice to read another one of your stories - I always enjoy them.
I love your Not Fade Away series, and this short fictlet fits in just beautifully. How bittersweet - that love eternal between the ever-living and the will-o-the-whisp mortals, as shown between Hal and Jane. That type of love is ever tinged with sadness, but such incrediblt joy also comes through clearly. I'm so happy that Olorime had a birthday so that I could read this gem.
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I had wondered if they had got together - how nice to know. I got some inkling of that last line when you mentioned that he had waited until the tree was at its peak - what a good way to celebrate, for them.
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And as usual, this lover story is bittersweet.
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Very nice to read another one of your stories - I always enjoy them.
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- Erulisse (one L)
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