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jah728

Thirteenth Floor - Part 3

Oct 31, 2014 13:32

For notes and disclaimers, see Part 1

( Part 3 )

miranda/andy, dwp

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jah728 October 31 2014, 21:07:36 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

perks123 October 31 2014, 23:18:18 UTC

Great story! Thank you.

jah728 October 31 2014, 23:48:36 UTC

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

awayfan October 31 2014, 23:31:45 UTC

Very good job. I enjoyed it all the through. Vivian was a great touch.

jah728 October 31 2014, 23:49:27 UTC

Thank you. Vivian may show up again some day. Punky gave me a couple of ideas.

mlgummer November 1 2014, 00:22:29 UTC

:) I loved it! Miranda and one of her predecessor'. How cool would it be to listen to the two of them chat?

jah728 November 1 2014, 00:34:05 UTC

Thank you. They would be a formidable duo that's for sure. I could also see a few epic disagreements.
Thanks for the read.

duwinter November 1 2014, 01:50:08 UTC

WOW! I loved this story. The idea of Miranda's predecessor haunting her old floor is inspired. Makes you wonder what things would be like when Miranda goes on. Reading this was a great Halloween treat! Thank you for sharing it!

jah728 November 1 2014, 01:53:11 UTC

Thank you for those kinds words. I'm glad you enjoyed it.