poetry class work

[jahjahwarrior55]

We had to write a poem last week and then we received critique from a fellow classmate and did a final draft. I just finished my final and based on his crticisms I think I created a pretty damn good poem

Comments

[alpinesumo]

i figured it out at heartfelt goodbyes. i like it a lot.

[jahjahwarrior55]

thanks

[dontwasteit]

i figured it out

[jahjahwarrior55]

ur allowed to figure it out

[dontwasteit]

i know. but you told us what it was about even though we all figured it out.

[jahjahwarrior55]

no... i told my journal

I write to my journal as though I am writing a message or a letter