Nice photo. It's fucking cool, though I'm not sure I'd pay ten bucks to party at my mom's. Sure, it's a nice place, but I think I could probably get in for free...
OK, well, enough people have stroked your ego for me to give the critical eye review.
Not a bad start. Now, give the balance and contrast some help, and make it stand out more. Also, consider cropping that photo down and shifting the text...you have a lot of open, blank space that just begs to be filled, but trying to fill all of it the way it is would totally clutter it. A little more info about what this is actually for would be a good idea, too...I see a place, time, and cost...but not an event or even an idea what it's for.
Critique: The text could use a dark outline or drop-shadows to make it stand out better. Perhaps you could even use a different font for the first line of text? You can d/l tons of fonts online........... Anywayz, nobody could ever complain about a flyer that shows off your @$$! ^_~
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that is sooo the most favorite pic I have taken of you.. it's like abstract n shyte... umm yah! :)
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Credit goes to Rei for the photo, but it's my ass that makes it look nice. Don't forget that.
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Not a bad start. Now, give the balance and contrast some help, and make it stand out more. Also, consider cropping that photo down and shifting the text...you have a lot of open, blank space that just begs to be filled, but trying to fill all of it the way it is would totally clutter it. A little more info about what this is actually for would be a good idea, too...I see a place, time, and cost...but not an event or even an idea what it's for.
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Yah, that font idea is a keeper! :D Thanks, cutie ;)
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