Lovin's For Fools

[jaimy818]

Go on and love her, love her forever
I will not tell her that I told you too
You’ll never know dear how much I love you
Lovin’s for Fools, Lovin’s for fools.

Defeated, Damon walked into the boarding house. He walked right past his brother Stefan who was sitting on the couch in the living room, towards the liquor table. While Damon poured some

Comments

[drkprncss17]

Awww <3 Poor Elena; she misses him :( He needs to come back home so she can show him how much!

[paceisthetrick]

Hey ;) Good little one shot. I know the characterization would be probably be totally canon, since you obviously understand TVD characters *WINK*. I basically adored every line in the bar and in the graveyard.

You should post it at fanfiction.net - if you do, i recommend putting breaks in your speech. right now, the way you have it set up, it's not that easy to read. EXAMPLE:

“Where have you been?” He asked.

“Since when do you have the need to check up on me?” Damon said while raising one if his eyebrows.

Stefan rolled his eyes and said “I just want to make sure you won’t kill anyone. I mean last time you were upset you.. ” He broke off. “Well, you know what happened.”

Damon took his bourbon in one go and smirked at Stefan.

^^^ easier to read and you always know who's talking.

xoxo

[loveepiclove]

I really liked the diary entry. It sounded so much like Elena, and Sar is right, you understand the characters well.

I enjoyed it. I would love to read more of your work. Please post more?